FDR Pearl Harbor Speech | |
Substance=Message |
Style=Rhetoric |
The facts speak for themselves. Surprise Attack. |
Less is more. |
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Use of incremental repetition. |
Our fight is result of actions by Japanese leadership/military |
Sets stage: “a date that will live in infamy”—odd syntax |
I am Commander in Chief |
Preacher/salespitch/radio-movie—lend gravity to situation—but also sense of confidence--authority |
Seek declaration of war |
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Japanese as enemy—deception |
Infamy, dastardly, deliberate, calculating, respect/disappointment; Empire; Japanese people; diplomatic process-- |
Moral right; righteousness; Victory; Propaganda Rhetoric of State—get American People outraged—righteous anger |
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We are Good Guys; they are Bad Guys |
Repetition; tone of voice—rational not overly emotional; moral righteousness; Mature |
Audiences: Japanese (Emperor, military, people, etc.) ; American people (radio audience, movie-reel audience, newspaper audience) ; Military (greatness/confidence/victory); Congress (declaration of war); Big Business; Hawaiians
What can you attack in the speech? Tone/Delivery: Anger Negotiation: We told you we didn’t think we should continue; What did US do? Hawaii—independent Kingdom overthrown by US imperialism (Guam, The Philippines), how “moral” are we?
How was GW Bush 9/11 speech different from FDR’s Pearl
Harbor speech?
George W. Bush 9/11 Speech | |
Substance |
Style |
Religious quote; we retain values—doesn’t use Lord or God in quote |
Generic; lifeless? With no audience; too gentle? Affected? Steel metaphor? String of metaphors Lack of gravity |
Demonize enemy (Evil)—more judgmental less rational |
Radio allows theatricality; TV is a cool medium that requires less emotion |
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Teleprompter makes it mechanical, passivity |
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Foundation of building vs foundation of America—clever does not equal persuasive—too speech-writerly in effect and lack of situational dynamics |
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Carl Rogers=student-centered learning, self-monitor, actuator, participator, experiential basis, facilitator, open-ended learning (life-long learning) curiosity as much critical thinking
Traditional=teacher-centered; skills and knowledge sets; information; reward and punishment
Arguments
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Classical |
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Rogerian |
Introduction (Exordium) |
Capture the audience’s attention. Introduce the issue and create exigence for your claim. Why is this an issue? Why do we need to pay attention?
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Introduction |
State the problem you hope to resolve. By presenting your issue as a problem you raise the possibility of positive change. Often opponents will want to solve the same problem. Not the rodeo clown approach—but already building sense of empathy—common problem Consensus through problem solving; presenting in humane way—dialogue not dialectic What are the possibilities—you’re going to need input from others |
Statement of Background (Narratio) |
Supply the context needed to understand the case you present. What circumstances, occurrences, or conditions do we need to be made aware of?
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Summary of Opposing Views |
As accurately and neutrally as possible, state the views of the people with whom you disagree. By doing this you show that you are capable of listening without judging and have given a fair hearing to people who think differently from you. Consensus and empathy up front—classical model seeks to refute from get-go |
Proposition (Partitio) |
State your position (claim/thesis), based on the information you have presented, and outline the major points that will follow. The partitio divides the background information from the reasoning. |
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Statement of Understand-ing |
Also called the statement of validity. Show that you understand that there are situations in which these views are valid. Which parts of the opposing argument s do you concede? Under which conditions might you share these views? Stipulation such as gun training, safe place, permit, lock, etc. |
Proof (Confirmatio) |
Present your reasons, subclaims, and evidence. Establish inferences between claim and support. Provide additional evidence for subclaims and evidence, where necessary. Explain and justify assumptions. Teachers will reduce in-class crime. Increase in student achievement/motivator Increased respect/less discipline Gun makes you feel a foot taller
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Statement of Your Position |
Now that readers have seen that you’ve given full consideration to views other than your own, they should be prepared to listen fairly to your views. State your position. Not an agonistic model—me and you—a consensus model |
Refutation (Refutatio) |
Anticipate and refute opposing arguments. In this section you demonstrate that you have already considered the issue thoroughly and have reached the only reasonable conclusion. Accidental shootings—gun training, some kids are asking for it Frightened kids won’t achieve—those students are immature babies that will never Grow; root out “bad eggs” Teacher on teacher violence—scare off Those who don’t really want to teach
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Statement of Contexts |
Describe situations in which you hope your views will be honored. By showing that your position has merit in specific contexts, you recognize that people won’t agree with you all of the time. However, opponents are allowed to agree in part and share common ground.
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Conclusion (Peroratio) |
Summarize the most important points. Make a final appeal to values, motivations, and feelings that are likely to encourage the audience to identify with your argument Ethos—appeal to common values
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Statement of Benefits |
Appeal to the self-interest of your opponents by showing how they would benefit from accepting your position; this concludes your essay on a hopeful, positive note. More open-ended, not win-or-less; Traditional argument Agon-based (gk for struggle) where
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Tradition legal trial of adversary positions Synthesized by jury |
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Rogers is consensus-based. Mediation instead of adversary trial. |
Lou Gehrig Pride of Yankees
Straight to-the-point |
Prolong the experience, entertain, |
Emotional impact |
Cap off, show the listeners—name individuals |
Unadorned fact and restrainst |
Gets rids of “lot to live for” |
Selfless |
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Lou Gehring Farewell Speech
"Fans, for the
past two weeks you have been reading about the bad break I got. Yet today I
consider myself the luckiest man on the face of this earth. I have been in
ballparks for seventeen years and have never received anything but kindness and
encouragement from you fans.
"Look at these grand men. Which of you wouldn't consider it the highlight of his
career just to associate with them for even one day? Sure, I'm lucky. Who
wouldn't consider it an honor to have known Jacob Ruppert? Also, the builder of
baseball's greatest empire, Ed Barrow? To have spent six years with that
wonderful little fellow, Miller Huggins? Then to have spent the next nine years
with that outstanding leader, that smart student of psychology, the best manager
in baseball today, Joe McCarthy? Sure, I'm lucky.
"When the New York Giants, a team you would give your right arm to beat, and
vice versa, sends you a gift - that's something. When everybody down to the
groundskeepers and those boys in white coats remember you with trophies - that's
something. When you have a wonderful mother-in-law who takes sides with you in
squabbles with her own daughter - that's something. When you have a father and a
mother who work all their lives so you can have an education and build your body
- it's a blessing. When you have a wife who has been a tower of strength and
shown more courage than you dreamed existed - that's the finest I know.
"So I close in saying that I may have had a tough break, but I have an awful lot
to live for."